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The Clown Prince
Join Date: Apr 2013
Posts: 5,046
Battle Record: 35-45
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Interesting...I enjoyed
Zyg, you brought your usual flair to the battle and its great you portray such a crisp view on the image that you use and the technical aspect of how you 'write' adds more wit I feel like you shine great when the topic plays to your advantage the best part is you kept a consistent lock on your style & it makes the topic.shine nice work my dude NYC, You also used the same pic as Zyg which edges this close because what Zyg does with words you add more imagery I feel your piece really showcases the extremes of your style it adds an element that pushes your verse beyond most others and that really adds that 'extra' seasoning a verse usually needs either way you did a great job here V/ I'm kind of hung up on this battle both writers are great there were hardly any flaws in the flow of their pieces and they both made the vibe so consistent its ridiculous alas there can only be one...and I'm going to have to go with... NYC...something about his verse just sticks out for me... I'm not saying Zyg had a bad verse hell they were evenly matched here and I feel like who did it best this time is NYC the vibe is slick the storytelling is nice great battle
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lmao nyc fucking sucks, nyc irrelevant, nyc irreverent, zygote may be our lord |
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