WK8: CopyPat (5-2) vs. Arid (0-0) [CopyPat wins, 8-0.]

zygote · 11-27-2014, 07:59 AM

Both are pretty descriptive. Arid had a sort of cliched multiple rhyming going on (underground - dumb it down etc + landscape - damn day etc). It wasn't bad but it doesn't compare well against Copypat's longer multiple rhymes on a strictly technical level. Also, I didn't really get any strong connection from Arid's writing to the topic, it was more train of thought rather than a focused effort. Copypat went for a simple straightforward approach and executed nicely. Voting for Copypat.

11-27-2014, 07:59 AM	#1
zygote Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 501 Battle Record: 33-12 Accomplishments - OM HOF (2x) Champed - Art of Writing League (3x) Rep Power: 737828	Both are pretty descriptive. Arid had a sort of cliched multiple rhyming going on (underground - dumb it down etc + landscape - damn day etc). It wasn't bad but it doesn't compare well against Copypat's longer multiple rhymes on a strictly technical level. Also, I didn't really get any strong connection from Arid's writing to the topic, it was more train of thought rather than a focused effort. Copypat went for a simple straightforward approach and executed nicely. Voting for Copypat.