deadman, yellow lights

[Rawn MD]

Black

I have not been active, but when I se ur OM as top post in front page, I feel compelled

Not ur best peice, but far from bad

U set the bar high for urself though, and this u already know

The style, scheme, and delivery (the way I read it) was different from ur norm, more bled thoughts, not that it didnt work, bc it did just varyied from the norm, which is cool.

What I truly enjoy about ur writing is how u get these deep thoughts expressed though being brief af

Less is more with u, and u do it very well

The lines that resonated the most with me...were

"fire and friendship the same. they're only what you sustain"
"i couldn't sell my soul but there's a market for shame"
..and ur closer

Def enjoyable, and I am happy I peeped.