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Dove had a much easier read, it was smooth with a more coherent story
I read it curious to see how u was gonna end it, with timeless is was more when isit gonna finish I liked the play on the two movies that was cool it was humorous verse but some lins where there and where obvious just rhyme like suction etc Dove the couple of lines about your mum were dope I thought close battle but dove takes it for a more interesting story with more impact vote dove dozer |
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