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The Clown Prince
Join Date: Apr 2013
Posts: 5,046
Battle Record: 35-45
Champed - Art of Writing League
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Both writers really brought a special something to this battle
I really enjoy reading both of you which makes this a tough decision Dom, your verse was amazing to say the least, the way it plays out was smooth I feel like you did a great job on using your topic and made it work to your advantage and after scrolling down to see where you hold up, I see the bets are against you which makes me sad because you really had a great idea for a topic and made it work you did a great job portraying your piece as you did, nice work my dude dead, I feel like you had a great verse as well, there is no telling where your verses will take me and I feel like you really had a chance to shine as far as how your writing goes... your lyrical acrobats really shine when it's time too, nice work my dude v/Dead, he had a quick verse but at the same time a smooth classic in a compact verse both great writers and really a great battle all together...if anything I feel like this should go in Dom's favor but at the same time you have to pick the one that is most fluent in writing form hence...black
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