RND1 - Persist vs E Tha Real [E Tha Real Wins] - OPEN FOR FEED

En Sabah Nur · 11-11-2014, 10:27 AM

The only people feeling syst... Should see a doctor soon
Mini survivor hits home with his dick, being its nickname in the lockerroom
D-leaguer of RB, netcees bench warmer for being often selfish
Undrafted. You couldnt be a smart pick If you were on the boston celtics
It's a popularity contest tourney, read the rules carefully as i gloat it out
^^ basically you could've beat me by no-show and then be voted out

i was being generous with the 1st bar, that shit felt disconnected with two different punchlines and concepts in each line

2nd was ironic as you were undrafted too lmao but you used it ammo so it worked

last bar hit the hardest

not a good verse, wording hurt you and it just felt subpar for somebody who needed to prove he deserved a spot on the team

prolly because it was keystyle

11-11-2014, 10:27 AM	#5
En Sabah Nur Member Join Date: Oct 2014 Posts: 82 Battle Record: 4-3 Rep Power: 187851	The only people feeling syst... Should see a doctor soon Mini survivor hits home with his dick, being its nickname in the lockerroom D-leaguer of RB, netcees bench warmer for being often selfish Undrafted. You couldnt be a smart pick If you were on the boston celtics It's a popularity contest tourney, read the rules carefully as i gloat it out ^^ basically you could've beat me by no-show and then be voted out i was being generous with the 1st bar, that shit felt disconnected with two different punchlines and concepts in each line 2nd was ironic as you were undrafted too lmao but you used it ammo so it worked last bar hit the hardest not a good verse, wording hurt you and it just felt subpar for somebody who needed to prove he deserved a spot on the team prolly because it was keystyle