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Old 11-09-2014, 05:13 PM   #5
Witty
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Originally Posted by FLOW View Post
Snap back to the tragedy
mention images in my rear view mirror you bitches' ll never see
Mic stand..catching a right hand
not punches but several daps..appreciation for sharing my raps
I have levels of conscience continuity
a distinct following while others mimic..I find a stream *(flow)
wasn't allow to speak..went against the grain
developed my own road..we are not the same
stay in the lane of..posting on a board/bored environment
while a select few..more complexed then whom "type" fire..but isn't firing
*Complex
No need to iron it..the irony is admiring
This didn't make sense
continue to type shit..your talk does nothing *suggest* retirement
Again, this didn't make sense
Double bag it bitch and skip that faggot shit
apply for a gym applicant..might help you attract a bitch
You meant application...try not to force rhymes
point dexter..wide imagination..time stretcher
doesnt fit in a crowd..head size might measure to his pint shy gestures
whose a bitch..bet all of Wayne's inheritance (Bruce, Bruce)
you wouldn't say shit..confusion"" doubt man-tits knows what a tool is
Viewing my music trying to compute shit
secretly amused with that I on the other hand actually do this
get on the mic..its a cake walk
just an impression. .no cakes involved..second thoughts of this bitch taking off
a race to the fridge you would win it
but recording bars like footage of prison might leave you winded
As well as the parts that didn't make sense a lot of this was very basic when it came to rhyming, try and experiment with more complex schemes, it got a little more advanced towards the end, but could have been better.

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