AOWL CONTENDER MATCH: NYCSPITZ (4-1) vs CopyPat (4-1) -- CopyPat 6-0

Vulgar · 11-08-2014, 02:47 PM

NYCSPITZ - Interesting verse. From what I took away from it, it was about a villainous group of Poker players who were playing for very high stakes. I imagined different variations of the Joker, or generally ruthless henchmen, and one who was slightly more down to Earth is put in a bad spot, and he's all in with his family at risk. Decent storyline and interpretation.

Copypat - This is what I expected from you, but at the same time you are getting better at hitting topics directly. It was a good breakdown of the woes of being a commission salesman. I dug it.

My vote goes to CopyPat for an easier-going verse that I liked a little more.

11-08-2014, 02:47 PM	#3
Vulgar Razor-thin derision Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,422 Battle Record: 40-25 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night LIV - Gimmick Battle League (2x) - Write Week II - Art of Writing League - Storytelling And Topical Invitational Tournament - STI - Haiku Writer Challenge - GWL Picture Challenge(2x) Rep Power: 49604320	NYCSPITZ - Interesting verse. From what I took away from it, it was about a villainous group of Poker players who were playing for very high stakes. I imagined different variations of the Joker, or generally ruthless henchmen, and one who was slightly more down to Earth is put in a bad spot, and he's all in with his family at risk. Decent storyline and interpretation. Copypat - This is what I expected from you, but at the same time you are getting better at hitting topics directly. It was a good breakdown of the woes of being a commission salesman. I dug it. My vote goes to CopyPat for an easier-going verse that I liked a little more.