I was a hipster before hipsters were hipsters, man.

Mr. J · 11-07-2014, 04:48 PM

We’re the oddities.
Pour yourself a drink and down it.
What else is there to do?
Life’s whatever you make it.
I’m lousy at building though.
Failed arts and crafts in high school.
My teacher thought I was a little slow,
But I was just high and cool.
Sat with the cool kids and made fun of the faggots.

^^^
Enjoyed this little section right here

that whole part pretty much set an already smooth tone
but it also made me laugh as well, and after I get into the section about being lucid
I fell out of my seat, it just flowed so well, I enjoyed the part afterwards too
this translates as more of a song to me, it plays out that way so well
I feel like you should have just kept going while you could
anyway, nice drop Zen, always a pleasure reading something of yours...
even if I have to look for it -_-

11-07-2014, 04:48 PM	#3
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,046 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349682	We’re the oddities. Pour yourself a drink and down it. What else is there to do? Life’s whatever you make it. I’m lousy at building though. Failed arts and crafts in high school. My teacher thought I was a little slow, But I was just high and cool. Sat with the cool kids and made fun of the faggots. ^^^ Enjoyed this little section right here that whole part pretty much set an already smooth tone but it also made me laugh as well, and after I get into the section about being lucid I fell out of my seat, it just flowed so well, I enjoyed the part afterwards too this translates as more of a song to me, it plays out that way so well I feel like you should have just kept going while you could anyway, nice drop Zen, always a pleasure reading something of yours... even if I have to look for it -_- __________________ .....laugh....and the world laughs with you