AOWL Week 8: c.d.m. (2-5) VS. Split (3-3) [SPLIT WINS, 6-2.]

Mike Wrecka · 04-08-2013, 08:34 PM

cdm - really enjoyed your verse. best ive read this week so far. what your really good at, is creating a very easy to read story that keeps me interested. anyone can read this and love it. your structure is not what im used to reading but this flowed really really well. like I said dope verse.

split - you went the religious route as well. when you go in on a topic you encompass it whole and fully. you leave nothing out. and you described things in a very complex way. your structure just still does not agree with me. i have trouble catching the flow and rhyme scheme sometimes and im beginning to think its just me stuck in my ways of being so used to reading one style that your stuff throws me off. iono. with that aside it was a dope verse with a lot of memorable phrases.

vote - cdm

like I said really enjoyed his verse this week , prolly my fave and ya split put up a good fight but my personal preference this round was cdms verse

04-08-2013, 08:34 PM	#10
Mike Wrecka WOW Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,591 Battle Record: 29-25 Champed - Writing Challenge League I Rep Power: 82779338	cdm - really enjoyed your verse. best ive read this week so far. what your really good at, is creating a very easy to read story that keeps me interested. anyone can read this and love it. your structure is not what im used to reading but this flowed really really well. like I said dope verse. split - you went the religious route as well. when you go in on a topic you encompass it whole and fully. you leave nothing out. and you described things in a very complex way. your structure just still does not agree with me. i have trouble catching the flow and rhyme scheme sometimes and im beginning to think its just me stuck in my ways of being so used to reading one style that your stuff throws me off. iono. with that aside it was a dope verse with a lot of memorable phrases. vote - cdm like I said really enjoyed his verse this week , prolly my fave and ya split put up a good fight but my personal preference this round was cdms verse __________________ A.bove T.he R.est