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11-06-2014, 10:00 PM
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Razor-thin derision
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Lmao Zyg has inspired me lately too to try my hand at braggadocio. This was pretty tight, I like the rhythmic momentum you carried about mid-way point to the ending. The references like Styx and assassin's creed injected this piece with readability. There's nothing like a good reference! I think you should collab with Zyg.
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