Contendership Match: Destroyer vs. Certain [Destroyer Wins]

BROKE LESNAR · 11-06-2014, 06:39 PM

Rebuttal Option

▪both competitors must agree to it at time of check-in
▪format is A, B, B, A (A posts first, B drops next, B posts follow-up, A drops final bar)

Due Monday 12am PST

Certain · 11-06-2014, 06:44 PM

YOU'VE PROBABLY GOT GRAY HAIRS HAVING TO FACE ME AGAIN SO SOON,
BUT UNLIKE YOUR WIFE, BROKE LESNAR SEEMS TO WANT TO DESTROY YER YOUTH.

Destroyer · 11-06-2014, 09:31 PM

des keeps it legit, while u stay full of shit & this is fact
cuz if Cer real... nah, that's just how people'd feel if u win this match

El Muffin · 11-06-2014, 09:48 PM

not a fan of either

tbh but i want to tell des specifically why

i dont see how People would feel surreal

youknow

u always hear it used like "the moment was surreal"

but never "i feel surreal" or the people feel surreal

thats strange

that being said i think your concept is way better than certs.

n im not going to nitpick it tooooo hard because i totally got wat u meant but thot it cud have been altered

certain..am i missing something in your bar ?

because it seems pretty basic to me. i must be missing something

n 1-2 chat could u explain?

as of now i vote des

but i will edit if theres something more to certs bar n i missed it

v/des

Spoken · 11-06-2014, 10:22 PM

Nice flip on the bar for certain .. Des I felt that was just super fucking basic... cer flips are kind expected and u just did the expected my bro on something or concept that's hard to finish with u mean I get the punch and I got it hitting but just nothing close to what I was expecting.

This match was pretty cool was hoping more of an HOONAH OF THINGS..... ok I re - read the bars and I clearly got certain on this one.

11-07-2014, 09:26 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Certain

YOU'VE PROBABLY GOT GRAY HAIRS HAVING TO FACE ME AGAIN SO SOON,
BUT UNLIKE YOUR WIFE, BROKE LESNAR SEEMS TO WANT TO DESTROY YER YOUTH.

Really didn't say much here. Putting it in CAPS did not make it hit harder, either.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Destroyer

des keeps it legit, while u stay full of shit & this is fact
cuz if Cer real... nah, that's just how people'd feel if u win this match

Wording sucked, TBH. Don't think you needed the "Cuz" either. I think you could have brushed up on the execution but definitely a better bar tbh.

v/Des - Better punch.

fresh · 11-07-2014, 09:43 AM

Certains bar didn't do anything for me. destroy yer youth? seems like it was a poor atempt at nameplay that didn't connect

Destroyers bar was fairly basic but it connected nonetheless.

v/Des

~RustyGunZ~ · 11-07-2014, 10:02 AM

des

didn't like certains at all
des had a cool np with an okay set up and execution

Blanco Bishop · 11-08-2014, 02:09 AM

Thought cert had a good idea but the punch was worded with very little sting.
Cats not familiar with des's wife's miscarriage won't get it either.

Des was sloppy but he knew, after reading certs bar, that he only needed to connect on a jab.

V Des

Tazz · 11-08-2014, 03:41 PM

v/Des...Wording was rough but Certains punch wasnt that impactful

YDK · 11-09-2014, 11:37 AM

I actually got certain taking this, had a better personal (pretty fuckin harsh tbh) along with a name play an decent wording.
Des just came too basic an statementish talm bout how voters would feel...not really a punchline just a basic NP
Vote certain

Kin · 11-09-2014, 05:56 PM

Cert...pretty heavy personal right there...the nameplay part of it was eh..juz strong cuz of the youth shot...harsh

Des..diggin this...thought the surreal shit worked nice..

Des a lil more creative

V...destro

Unfukwitable · 11-09-2014, 07:24 PM

alil shakey hear ... I'ma go with Des for the win tho he just edged it.

Mike Wrecka · 11-09-2014, 09:56 PM

I got certain. The backstory has come to light a bit , making the punch hit harder than I originally thought. Destroyers np was decent

Tic · 11-10-2014, 02:31 PM

Certain's was worded awkwardly for me, I wasn't a fan. Des had an alright np that worked better than Certain's bar IMO.

Des

BROKE LESNAR · 11-11-2014, 09:30 AM

I'm pretty sure Certain used that "Destroy er" np before in this league. Let me check. Lol yeah. First time you guys battle it was "Destroy er". The "er" and the "yer" are being used differently but not the "Destroy."

Going with Des here. Liked the concept and np more.

v-Des

11-06-2014, 06:39 PM	#1
BROKE LESNAR βгοкε ㄴεςηαг Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 2,245 Battle Record: 9-4 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12760964	Contendership Match: Destroyer vs. Certain [Destroyer Wins] Rebuttal Option ▪both competitors must agree to it at time of check-in ▪format is A, B, B, A (A posts first, B drops next, B posts follow-up, A drops final bar) Due Monday 12am PST

11-06-2014, 09:48 PM	#4
El Muffin DOHpe since 02' Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Surrounded by white ppl Posts: 14,690 Battle Record: 43-24 Champed - Netcees Battle League - 1-2 Punch Onslaught - 1-2 Punch League - Hot or Thot Roast - Hot or Thot 2018 - Fight Night 11 - NPL Roast Rep Power: 34230535	not a fan of either tbh but i want to tell des specifically why i dont see how People would feel surreal youknow u always hear it used like "the moment was surreal" but never "i feel surreal" or the people feel surreal thats strange that being said i think your concept is way better than certs. n im not going to nitpick it tooooo hard because i totally got wat u meant but thot it cud have been altered certain..am i missing something in your bar ? because it seems pretty basic to me. i must be missing something n 1-2 chat could u explain? as of now i vote des but i will edit if theres something more to certs bar n i missed it v/des __________________ It’s like weed in Highschool- w/ the cans I’ll smoke you Bitch I floss . I Got the chain out to see like Constantinople

11-06-2014, 10:22 PM	#5
Spoken ...DA GAWD... Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,355 Battle Record: 13-34 Rep Power: 5860413	Nice flip on the bar for certain .. Des I felt that was just super fucking basic... cer flips are kind expected and u just did the expected my bro on something or concept that's hard to finish with u mean I get the punch and I got it hitting but just nothing close to what I was expecting. This match was pretty cool was hoping more of an HOONAH OF THINGS..... ok I re - read the bars and I clearly got certain on this one. __________________ WP Po'ethics

11-09-2014, 11:37 AM	#11
YDK ghost in the matrix Join Date: Apr 2013 Location: Covington, KY Posts: 4,563 Battle Record: 14-25 Champed - Art of Writing League (x2) - Lime Green Poetry Association Rep Power: 8181112	I actually got certain taking this, had a better personal (pretty fuckin harsh tbh) along with a name play an decent wording. Des just came too basic an statementish talm bout how voters would feel...not really a punchline just a basic NP Vote certain __________________

11-09-2014, 07:24 PM	#13
Unfukwitable baz∞ka Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 1,643 Battle Record: 38-35 Champed - Fight Night 7 - Battle Arena Tournament - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 36460388	alil shakey hear ... I'ma go with Des for the win tho he just edged it. __________________ WICKeD

11-06-2014, 06:44 PM	#2
Certain Mad fucking dangerous. Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 12,066 Battle Record: 40-19 Champed - AOWL Season 3 - Art of Writing League (2x) Rep Power: 85899406	YOU'VE PROBABLY GOT GRAY HAIRS HAVING TO FACE ME AGAIN SO SOON, BUT UNLIKE YOUR WIFE, BROKE LESNAR SEEMS TO WANT TO DESTROY YER YOUTH.

11-07-2014, 09:43 AM	#7
fresh Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2014 Posts: 302 Battle Record: 0-4 Rep Power: 0	Certains bar didn't do anything for me. destroy yer youth? seems like it was a poor atempt at nameplay that didn't connect Destroyers bar was fairly basic but it connected nonetheless. v/Des

11-07-2014, 10:02 AM	#8
~RustyGunZ~ (ง'̀-'́)ง Join Date: Nov 2015 Posts: 15,844 Battle Record: 52-28 Accomplishments -50+ wins Champed -Summer Classic VIII -Netcees Battle League -BA Picture -BA TagTeam -Fight Night Cypher I -Fight Night XXXV -Key Grand Prix 2018 1/2 Rep Power: 85899406	des didn't like certains at all des had a cool np with an okay set up and execution

11-08-2014, 02:09 AM	#9
Blanco Bishop Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: Cali Posts: 1,460 Battle Record: 11-20 Rep Power: 4150485	Thought cert had a good idea but the punch was worded with very little sting. Cats not familiar with des's wife's miscarriage won't get it either. Des was sloppy but he knew, after reading certs bar, that he only needed to connect on a jab. V Des

11-08-2014, 03:41 PM	#10
Tazz Junior Member Join Date: Oct 2014 Posts: 22 Battle Record: 0-2 Rep Power: 90564	v/Des...Wording was rough but Certains punch wasnt that impactful

11-09-2014, 05:56 PM	#12
Kin Kill.It.Nonstop Join Date: Jun 2014 Posts: 666 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 662201	Cert...pretty heavy personal right there...the nameplay part of it was eh..juz strong cuz of the youth shot...harsh Des..diggin this...thought the surreal shit worked nice.. Des a lil more creative V...destro

11-09-2014, 09:56 PM	#14
Mike Wrecka WOW Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,591 Battle Record: 29-25 Champed - Writing Challenge League I Rep Power: 82779338	I got certain. The backstory has come to light a bit , making the punch hit harder than I originally thought. Destroyers np was decent __________________ A.bove T.he R.est

11-10-2014, 02:31 PM	#15
Tic Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 1,509 Battle Record: 51-29 Champed - Newbie Tourney VII - Netcees Battle League Rep Power: 20137909	Certain's was worded awkwardly for me, I wasn't a fan. Des had an alright np that worked better than Certain's bar IMO. Des

11-11-2014, 09:30 AM	#16
BROKE LESNAR βгοкε ㄴεςηαг Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 2,245 Battle Record: 9-4 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12760964	I'm pretty sure Certain used that "Destroy er" np before in this league. Let me check. Lol yeah. First time you guys battle it was "Destroy er". The "er" and the "yer" are being used differently but not the "Destroy." Going with Des here. Liked the concept and np more. v-Des