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04-08-2013, 06:16 PM
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Join Date: Mar 2013
Posts: 66
Battle Record: 2-0
Rep Power: 38  |
Since the battle was moved to the closed ones I posted the verse in open mic
http://artofbattling.com/showthread....3844#post43844 Would appreciate any reads / feedback anyone wants to throw towards it. Since I got the no show win, I'd still like the valuable input of those in the league towards where I can improve, or their thoughts on my verse. <3 PLUR
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