AOWL Week 8: Nigma (4-1) VS. Adonis (3-1) [ADONIS WINS, 7-1.]

Mike Wrecka · 04-08-2013, 05:49 PM

very cool battle.

Adonis- delivered a beautiful verse. it was poetic, and painted a very pretty picture using phrases and sayings that were really creative. it had a good cadence, though not great. but it was a very well put together verse, showed lots of discipline and polish. one word to sum it up - sublime

nigma - fucking incredible concept. great idea. it was well executed in parts but others the flow was a bit basic for me (ie. lack of multis and inners) I think what you really needed was an opening explaining what was going on a bit before the dr. started meeting all these people. I felt a little dropped in the middle of a story. overall very good verse, I enjoyed the read.

vote - Adonis

a poetic well disciplined verse against a better story and concept. in the end Adonis , complexity and creativity within his verse lines wins the day. yes nigma, had the more creative concept, but Adonis had the more creative verse if that makes sense. good battle guys. thanks for the reads

04-08-2013, 05:49 PM	#12
Mike Wrecka WOW Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,591 Battle Record: 29-25 Champed - Writing Challenge League I Rep Power: 82779338	very cool battle. Adonis- delivered a beautiful verse. it was poetic, and painted a very pretty picture using phrases and sayings that were really creative. it had a good cadence, though not great. but it was a very well put together verse, showed lots of discipline and polish. one word to sum it up - sublime nigma - fucking incredible concept. great idea. it was well executed in parts but others the flow was a bit basic for me (ie. lack of multis and inners) I think what you really needed was an opening explaining what was going on a bit before the dr. started meeting all these people. I felt a little dropped in the middle of a story. overall very good verse, I enjoyed the read. vote - Adonis a poetic well disciplined verse against a better story and concept. in the end Adonis , complexity and creativity within his verse lines wins the day. yes nigma, had the more creative concept, but Adonis had the more creative verse if that makes sense. good battle guys. thanks for the reads __________________ A.bove T.he R.est