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11-04-2014, 06:57 PM
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Mad fucking dangerous.
Join Date: Jul 2013
Posts: 12,066
Battle Record: 40-19
Champed - AOWL Season 3
- Art of Writing League (2x)
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Unfukwitable: I'm 99% sure you learned what ricin does from Breaking Bad, so you should know that it won't leave him dead on the scene. The actual name play was OK, but the follow through was no better than the setup.
Beans: The concept again was better than the setup. But I liked the double usage of admit, and the mistakes weren't as bad as Unfukwitable's. Vote: Beans
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