AOWL Week 8: Nigma (4-1) VS. Adonis (3-1) [ADONIS WINS, 7-1.]

Objective · 04-08-2013, 05:15 AM

Adonis: I enjoyed reading your piece. It flowed well to me. It seems like you're writing about conception to me as well, how humans have went through evolution from the beginning of the earth to where we are today. And how we keep on moving forward to make babies. A down to earth verse on such a open topic was a bold move, but an effective one. Well done.

Nigma: It's cool that you wrote about several people but I'd like to see a more definite connection between them, the story itself wasn't exactly great.. It's still interesting that brought you brought up people like Underwood. I read a bit about stuff like this some time ago and I was hoping you'd come to conclusion of some sort rather than just talk about them. I like the concept you went for, I just didn't really like how you executed it.

Vote - Adonis, I felt his story was better crafted with a story that connected better than Nigma's.

04-08-2013, 05:15 AM	#9
Objective ( ͡º ͜ʖ ͡º) Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,868 Battle Record: 17-32 Rep Power: 52474192	Adonis: I enjoyed reading your piece. It flowed well to me. It seems like you're writing about conception to me as well, how humans have went through evolution from the beginning of the earth to where we are today. And how we keep on moving forward to make babies. A down to earth verse on such a open topic was a bold move, but an effective one. Well done. Nigma: It's cool that you wrote about several people but I'd like to see a more definite connection between them, the story itself wasn't exactly great.. It's still interesting that brought you brought up people like Underwood. I read a bit about stuff like this some time ago and I was hoping you'd come to conclusion of some sort rather than just talk about them. I like the concept you went for, I just didn't really like how you executed it. Vote - Adonis, I felt his story was better crafted with a story that connected better than Nigma's.