Obnoxious Dave

[Inno]

cool shit bro...def the opening line was a killer and just set the the tone for the rest of this piece..great
word use man..vocab i guess its called lol..anyway great word use like i said but along with that you had
great fluidity from word to word ..i mean it was seamless at times..so that just made your choices that
much doper dude..great piec here.

Black tee's and platinum chains but something's happened, A change.
He's zapped and tazed and slapped in chains.
Locked up in handcuffs on a passenger plane
For rap sheets of past beefs of madness and rage.

that sghit ther was rhyming smooooooth lol good shit man