WK4 : NYCSpitz(2-1) vs. Dead man(2-1) -- NYC 7-2

asylum · 10-26-2014, 08:47 PM

holy mother of God. i just want to thank both of you before i start being judgemental and saying shit i have to for the sake of picking a victor. fucking amazing writing. you guys seriously deserve blowjobs on top of mount everest high piles of cocaine from the most expensive hookers money could buy for these feats of magnificence. anyway,
nycspitz - i dont know where to start. i read the entire piece, and simply bask in its glory. i mean it's everything. it's all that ever is or will be. it is magnificent, yet wordly. omnipotent, yet tangible. how the fuck ... idk bro. i know you're sitting at home, sipping on a earl gray or something like.. yeah, i'm the boss. but seriously, i must reiterate. this shit was dope. how the fuck did you come up with the term androgynous angels? idk. i hope reincarnation is like this. i thought i was just going to die and rot and shit. this sounds WAY BETTER. you gave me hope today. i love you.

dead man - FUCKING WAY TO HIT THE OPPOSITE ANGLE! shit yeah. this is right up my alley bro. dark, sinister, abrasive, violent.. love it. instant classic. i love your stop START flow with the periods in your lines. shits dope. your flow is completely unconventional and simultaneously acceptable. i think that might be your strongest point. loved this part..
campfire counsel. oak, hibiscus, soldiers at 7
mercenaries at 20 and all hungover at breakfast
jumping over gorges in a Porsche 911
its believable once madness is the source of your method
script draft prescription medicine distorting perception
horses gallop in formation at the floor of the crescent
the whole fucking thing. i would've honestly like a double syllable carry over into the next line but the a in formation kinda matched up with the one in barefoot. so i wont complain. but that's a valid comment because you carried the rhyme for a few bars then completel changed scheme on me without a solid transition. feels strange critiquing a level of writing so far above my own, but humbly, i believe this is not simply opinion. you really hit the topic well. i really enjoyed your approach in that sense.

FUCK THIS IS GOING TO BE HARD.
/v nycspitz - you told an amazing fucking story that was well rounded on so many levels and hit home in so many different ways that i cannot possibly vote against you for any fucking reason EVEN IF dead mans verse was one of the catchiest, on point, best takes on a topic.. i've ever fucking read. i am seriously overjoyed to cast a vote in this battle and you guys are fucking amazing writers. thank you so much for your effort and the entertainment it's provided. positive emoticon.

10-26-2014, 08:47 PM	#1
asylum Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2014 Posts: 999 Battle Record: 7-5 Rep Power: 8214211	holy mother of God. i just want to thank both of you before i start being judgemental and saying shit i have to for the sake of picking a victor. fucking amazing writing. you guys seriously deserve blowjobs on top of mount everest high piles of cocaine from the most expensive hookers money could buy for these feats of magnificence. anyway, nycspitz - i dont know where to start. i read the entire piece, and simply bask in its glory. i mean it's everything. it's all that ever is or will be. it is magnificent, yet wordly. omnipotent, yet tangible. how the fuck ... idk bro. i know you're sitting at home, sipping on a earl gray or something like.. yeah, i'm the boss. but seriously, i must reiterate. this shit was dope. how the fuck did you come up with the term androgynous angels? idk. i hope reincarnation is like this. i thought i was just going to die and rot and shit. this sounds WAY BETTER. you gave me hope today. i love you. dead man - FUCKING WAY TO HIT THE OPPOSITE ANGLE! shit yeah. this is right up my alley bro. dark, sinister, abrasive, violent.. love it. instant classic. i love your stop START flow with the periods in your lines. shits dope. your flow is completely unconventional and simultaneously acceptable. i think that might be your strongest point. loved this part.. campfire counsel. oak, hibiscus, soldiers at 7 mercenaries at 20 and all hungover at breakfast jumping over gorges in a Porsche 911 its believable once madness is the source of your method script draft prescription medicine distorting perception horses gallop in formation at the floor of the crescent the whole fucking thing. i would've honestly like a double syllable carry over into the next line but the a in formation kinda matched up with the one in barefoot. so i wont complain. but that's a valid comment because you carried the rhyme for a few bars then completel changed scheme on me without a solid transition. feels strange critiquing a level of writing so far above my own, but humbly, i believe this is not simply opinion. you really hit the topic well. i really enjoyed your approach in that sense. FUCK THIS IS GOING TO BE HARD. /v nycspitz - you told an amazing fucking story that was well rounded on so many levels and hit home in so many different ways that i cannot possibly vote against you for any fucking reason EVEN IF dead mans verse was one of the catchiest, on point, best takes on a topic.. i've ever fucking read. i am seriously overjoyed to cast a vote in this battle and you guys are fucking amazing writers. thank you so much for your effort and the entertainment it's provided. positive emoticon.