WK4 : Soulstice(1-1) vs. Adonis(1-0) -- Soulstice Wins Flawless

Mr. J · 10-26-2014, 04:05 PM

Adonis, normally I'm impressed with your pieces as far as writing goes
you seemed to throw this together either real quick or carried on uninspired
true the topics as of late share obviously easier draws of inspiration
and you seemed relaxed, too relaxed for your oppenent
the flow of the topic was smoooth but felt unrelated to the topic

Soul, another impressive piece and quite short I might add
the verse seemed to be a little unrevealing at first due to your verbiafe
but you continued on holding a firm grasp on what you were all about
I enjoyed the idea and as it unraveled it was very impressive

V/soulstice, both styles clashed in the best way they could.
but at the end of the day one has to overcome the other
soulstice's complex verse holds its ground

10-26-2014, 04:05 PM	#7
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,046 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349682	Adonis, normally I'm impressed with your pieces as far as writing goes you seemed to throw this together either real quick or carried on uninspired true the topics as of late share obviously easier draws of inspiration and you seemed relaxed, too relaxed for your oppenent the flow of the topic was smoooth but felt unrelated to the topic Soul, another impressive piece and quite short I might add the verse seemed to be a little unrevealing at first due to your verbiafe but you continued on holding a firm grasp on what you were all about I enjoyed the idea and as it unraveled it was very impressive V/soulstice, both styles clashed in the best way they could. but at the end of the day one has to overcome the other soulstice's complex verse holds its ground __________________ .....laugh....and the world laughs with you