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Old 10-21-2014, 10:39 AM   #1
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Feedback needed. Mainly I need suggestions on how to mk concept s work without saying u look like lol. Esp when ur battling just a head. Verse got a bit repetitive but I still think its pretty good for a rough draft. Thx in advance


Fuck you frail bitch. Ahh shit ill hurt you now
I see ull nvr Break Concentration but u look like u jus escaped Auschwitz n Birkenau
You lack charisma nigga. Get the msg soon
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Orc's like "I'm real m8" ..you think we're foolish, damn
I mean we'd be Inclined' to believe u if u didn't look like a cyclist in the Tour De France
U want Hands,b? Ull get stopped with tact precision
I'll have you drink thru a straw..wait< your frail ass looks like u box in that division
Ull never take the triple crown. This renegades so sloppy
Fuck with me n you Won't be Alive Furlong u prematurely aging horse jockey
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Old 10-21-2014, 05:43 PM   #2
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Fuck you frail bitch. Ahh shit ill hurt you now
I see ull nvr Break Concentration but u look like u jus escaped Auschwitz n Birkenau
Orc's like "I'm real m8" ..you think we're foolish, damn
I mean we'd be Inclined' to believe u if u didn't look like a cyclist in the Tour De France
U want Hands,b? Ull get stopped with tact precision
I'll have you drink thru a straw..wait< your frail ass looks like u box in that division
3/5 bars isnt bad at all, especially when od'ing on similes

you still managed to bring the funny

would have been an entertaining battle muff
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