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10-20-2014, 02:55 AM
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Certain's verse was certainly humorous. It had this day to day normalcy feel to it which was very cleverly well done. I myself have never had a Chipotle burrito for reasons I shall not name. Anyways, I have no qualms with Certain's verse I enjoyed it, and thought it was more finesse than NYC's. To write a verse about such a simple manner, and make it enjoyable is a skillful achievement. What's more, it is no secret that the simple things in life are what make our heart so lightheartedly content. You also addressed the topic with more virtuosity.
Yet, I cannot turn a blind eye to NYC's delightful story. I am an avid fan of the feudal era of Japan, and of the way of the samurai. And although you portrayed the samurai a bit more course, instead of the centered mentally kempt warrior they usually are, although deadly, nevertheless I did enjoy your in depth story more. Vote: NYC |
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