W3: Three-Planes-Aligned (0-1) vs. patrown (0-1) -- 3PA Flawless 4-0

NYCSPITZ · 10-19-2014, 03:52 PM

Patrown I really liked this verse. Happy to see the elevation. Storytelling, vocab, delivery have all improved immensely. In time you will be top tier, with slight twerks (lol) to vocab, delivery, and j adding more elements of surprise.

3pa Fav verse I've read so far this season (although I've probably only read a quarter total so far). Not much to critique, excellent rhyming creativity and delivery

v/ 3pa

10-19-2014, 03:52 PM	#1
NYCSPITZ SYRACUSE Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,031 Battle Record: 31-37 Champed - Write Night II - Alias Topical Tournament Rep Power: 4743547	Patrown I really liked this verse. Happy to see the elevation. Storytelling, vocab, delivery have all improved immensely. In time you will be top tier, with slight twerks (lol) to vocab, delivery, and j adding more elements of surprise. 3pa Fav verse I've read so far this season (although I've probably only read a quarter total so far). Not much to critique, excellent rhyming creativity and delivery v/ 3pa __________________ UNIFIED THEORY