AOWL IV Chat & Predictions (Week 3).

Frank · 10-14-2014, 10:47 PM

@kannon come beef with me newbie

kannon · 10-15-2014, 12:16 AM

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Originally Posted by Frank

@kannon come beef with me newbie

um.. okay. you have shitty verse structure, and your lines are all way too long.

Adonis · 10-15-2014, 12:35 AM

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Originally Posted by kannon

um.. okay. you have shitty verse structure, and your lines are all way too long.

your mechanics overt clutter and your rhymes make gay dude songs

MURDERED IT!!

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