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Old 10-10-2014, 08:00 PM   #2
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A Tale B.C.


The sun drenched atrium yellows her toga; this estate is immaculate
as Hera Maximinius thinks - their mercenaries were raided in Nazareth
her husband Severus, the general; his war plans soar at the zenith of art
...but men never fight their hardest when the prize is just the greed in their hearts
slaves scurry past Severus, and arcs of water, flowing from cherubs of four -
with his wife by a fountain - leisurely teaching her the merits of war:
"When the barbarians came from the East in order to attack Rome and her majesty
the Republic called upon me to quell this...inane moment of savagery
Riding upon my mighty steed, with seven legions of soldiers -
I was disturbed to meet their shocking numbers and evil composure
Their leader was a rugged man known as Theodus Jinn
who comported himself with the gait of a nobleman wearing a vehement grin.
They torched a particular brush, native to the soil of their land
surprising us with arrow volleys from the core of their clan
I led a frontal rush - aided by skilled swordsman of superior heritage
and expert archers. Led by horse in our myriad chariots.
Their front lines fell - our men the best from Rome, Carthage and Gaul
but the air...quivered with question as our whole crushing carnage devolved."

"and what of the merits of war?" asked Hera.

He noticed her head's beautiful movements and the supple curve of her breasts
firmly grasping her right hip, he swiftly alters the purr of her breath
"the merits of war? Learning to fight for something greater than wealth.
A lifespan's fleeting. The emperor himself will soon succumb to his health-
Men musn't fight for glory - men must fight for the Republic itself."
--"He was only a torso; agonized, smelling of imminent death.
The greatest lesson I've had in sentence: listen close to Theodus Jinn's finishing breath":

--'whether we end in Purgatory, Hades, or what's left of Elysium
we only fight so as to hold more of our next experience
Men die of ignoble causes - vice, weapons, deceit...
but as hearty men...it's our fate to make these epochs of peace
.'
"There I stood, my sword a guillotine in this divisive melee -
emasculated, I beheaded my wise foe at the height of his heyday.
In seconds, the barbarians stated to rally 'round Theodus Jinn
Sensing his death, they roared madly in the feverish din
pushed back, my soldiers slaughtered, I stopped and stared from a summit -
and began the ride home, feeling an oddly strange despair in my stomach."

"Passing lepers, various country crusaders and crews
we trekked home - by the grace of a force greater than Zeus
with half a legion to spare, after that bittersweet hardened departure
I calculated what we'd need - 12 legions and a squadron of archers.
Many good men died - not for the cause of church or the evil of crimes
Many good men died for an idea - the most peaceful of times
My love, here are the merits of war: we learn that everything's connected to fate
and strong men bestow their person to the next who await."



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