Obnoxious Dave

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top notch writing here, very polished, covers all the bases. flow/rhythm, complexity, content and substance, scheming, vocab...shits dope dude. zero complaints. i have a feeling (im guessing cause i have no idea who u are and i'm new to this site but) that you are almost taken for granted because u write shit like this all the time and make it look suuuuuper easy. am i right??

anyways seriously stellar stuff here. Best overall piece i have read so far since joining


Depressed. Betrayed. Compressed. Decayed under Heaven's weight. 'I best behave,
Still in a belligerent temperment. I waste no breath to pray. What's left I save.'
Relax. Pause. Wait for honest praise. Blast off like a comet's blaze.
Emotionally bonkers. Socially awkward jackin off to topless babes.
Obnoxious Dave.


retarded opener, sickness

Thoroughly Enjoyed... i'll be watching for more. hit me back with some feed on my joints if u don't mind, thanks