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The Clown Prince
Join Date: Apr 2013
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I'm a gymnastic, fantastic twist down into a judo roll
you know what I do to ho's, I do the same to opponents sautee & roast em', while you hittin' the brakes I'm coastin' toastin' to the best reflected in the glass I'm sippin' from lookin' at that red velvet cake from a distance when I'm gettin' done it's pick n run, roulette flow, Mugsy Bogues with the pick n roll that wick & rope, I set flame to the city that I kick it in don't matter if that boy caught whenever they brought the pickets in I'm countin' my dividends, shut case due to lack of evidence I'm sittin' in that Pumpkin Pie with that white coat glistenin' when all the thanks is given, I take your props & shelf em at the top... like children I hand out your examples with blessin's in that pot whenever my attention is lost & I want to laugh at the stress in your heart I mean if this is a treat to you then I guess there's a few lessons to draw a few instructions that deserve more mention & thought... it doesn't matter the style or the direction you sought more of a reflection on "why....the fuck?" stressin' my cause It's depressin' but I guess it's more of "fuck you asshole" attention I've drawn and well...you wouldn't fall short there
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Some good lines here. I feel a couple were forced in order to rhyme.
I really liked the last 6 lines. I like the roulette flow and Mugsy Bogues references. Decent read. I'll + you for this. |
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