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10-01-2014, 05:08 AM
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Blanco Bishop vs. TheMuzzl3 [Blanco Bishop Wins]
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▪both competitors must agree to it at time of check-in ▪format is A, B, B, A (A posts first, B drops next, B posts follow-up, A drops final bar) Due Monday 12am PST Last edited by BROKE LESNAR; 10-01-2014 at 05:13 AM. |
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10-04-2014, 08:47 PM
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You're something like a doormat, the bottom of the totem pole
a petty simp just trying to Belong...n my cock is so Terri wanna throat it whole. |
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10-05-2014, 07:42 PM
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I'm down for rebuttal option, if you want.
@Blanco Bishop
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10-05-2014, 11:15 PM
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Fuckit, I don't feel like making sure it all lines up with syllables and all.
This dude steppin on stage could start a riot, dunno how to make his fake ass be quiet. It looks like Blanco Tequila overuse is pretty fuckin obvious: this white dude needs a diet.
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10-05-2014, 11:21 PM
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10-06-2014, 08:58 PM
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Muzzl3 improved over last week, it just wasn't that good of a concept. Blanco's appears hard to read at first but if u put emphasis on "n my cock is" then it flows much smooth. Haven't really seen the belong wp, and the bar did feel a bit pauseworthy lmao, but it was dope in execution.
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10-07-2014, 04:30 PM
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Muzzles getting there but this was disjointed
U said he wss a drunk n needs to lose weight Eh Lol I though t terri was a adj at first..coz yr like my cock is so terri Thats the thing with those kind of wp..u leave it up to the reader to make the connection I got it. Just felt ut could be done better V Blanco Blanco won it. Not a fan of how he worded it
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10-07-2014, 08:46 PM
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Blanco had the harder hit. Muzzles improving though
V/Blanco |
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10-07-2014, 10:42 PM
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....smh.
giving it to blanco simply cuz i felt muzzle came up short with the drinking/diet concept. there was nothing witty or lyrical about it at all. keep working vote: blanco
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10-07-2014, 11:21 PM
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theMuzzl3: You had nothing creative in this line, just a straight-forward fake personal.
Blanco Bishop: Your phrasing was terrible, as the "long" did not translate well over. Vote: Blanco Bishop
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