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Senior Member
Join Date: Aug 2014
Location: on the couch
Posts: 842
Battle Record: 2-6
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Des:
Décent first line. Second line started good, but the ending seemed to lack enthusiasm or eagerness to come at him with an insult or carry-over from the first line. I don't know if daylyt is a reference or misspelling of daylight. I think you put very little time and effort into this. 7/10 Tic Tac: First line was okay, started off talking bout yourself; which isn't a plus in the 1-2. Second part of the first line was good. Second line I couldn't quite grasp. I'm not sure if it was improper English, or if I am too dumb to get it… but I (think) I get the overall point, and it was a better closing line that Des. 7.5/10 /v Tic Tac |
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