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Old 10-07-2014, 03:18 PM   #12
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Des:
Décent first line. Second line started good, but the ending seemed to lack enthusiasm or eagerness to come at him with an insult or carry-over from the first line.

I don't know if daylyt is a reference or misspelling of daylight.

I think you put very little time and effort into this.
7/10

Tic Tac:
First line was okay, started off talking bout yourself; which isn't a plus in the 1-2. Second part of the first line was good.
Second line I couldn't quite grasp. I'm not sure if it was improper English, or if I am too dumb to get it… but I (think) I get the overall point, and it was a better closing line that Des.
7.5/10

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