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10-06-2014, 01:32 AM
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Robin Williams of Fallen Victims
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Inno - verse felt muddled and forced. Lots of issues with wording. The concept was cool I guess but the feeling of a city based off music didnt spring to life for me. Therr was some strong imagery to begin with but it fell flat by the end.
Dove -- strong opener kind of thing going in....some forced/cliche motifs. Pretty decent display of lyricism and focus for what it is. Overall if lacks substance but excels in mechanics Vote inno Last edited by Pent uP; 10-06-2014 at 01:35 AM. |
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