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thought it was midnight PST, correct? My verse is mid writing
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foos be too busy mutli-accounting to write a verse. Lol.
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Anyone down to help with mag?
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The price I pay is perpetual pain that’s powered by precautions I could oxidize your inferno with vernacular and cross-paths But you’ve only sprung half the passion i son like a vernal equinox - march
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u mad know how I could tell ? cause you just broke character time for a new shtick anyway tbh. maybe your next NC portrayal that takes up your entire life ,could be a dog woof woof barkin idiote or a mail man I deliver letters, you fucking idiotes. stamp stamp get on it man. your new role is awaiting. theater geek
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Stupid fucking muzzl3 faggot.
Dont talk to me about being unbiased, you frothing retard. Dock me 1.5 muzzl3 dollars for being lates BECAUSE YOU DONT UNDERSTAND TIME ZONES. thanx for reimbursing me another arbitrary amount of muzz3uros for confusing you with super eleet met4s. dumbass NO MUZZL3 VOTES Shit's gonna be my mantra until you can keep your rampant emotions out of the Quick Reply box when responding to battles. You spent 33% of your breakdown telling me how u werent gonna cry. And you were intoxicated YOU MUST HAVE SOME CLOUT WITH ADMINS stfu. do not address me in public
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Lol I love muzzle bashing split
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i would help if i knew how / knew what i was doing -- perhaps in distant future.
late post... docked points!
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Re-reading your post more thoroughly and for the 3rd time, I feel it is some very good writing -- I raised my overall score of your post in an edit.
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My writing skill and technique are my own. I have a fresh viewpoint and I feel that my votes are valuable in that manner. I'll learn more, but perhaps my explanations help.
Like I said, after a 3rd read I had decided your post was good, but kannon still won my vote.
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0 humiliated because Pent uP > Pancakebars.
gnomean my nigga?
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In terms of my horrid drunk writing that one wasn't bad!
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I'm not here to give you a lesson in justifying your votes in a meaningful way with solid evidence to back it up, nor am I here to teach you how to build a cohesive voting record that means you have to justify votes less. I am here to tell you to no longer vote on my battles, starting with the last one I told you AHEAD OF TIME to NOT vote on, because you are a historically terrible voter IMO none of your half-baked votes should count towards anything but your voting link totals. You are the human embodiment of the palmed coin flip, and your entire legacy is for jest
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First few lines, dope. Next few lines, meh. Last few lines were really good. I like how you rhymed in eighteenth notes (stupid Netcees doesn't care rabble rabble this muzzle is clamping down on my urethra rabble rabble) and I also liked how you rhymed, randomly with rhymes in your rhymes, first few lines and also the middle few lines also. [Tangential reference to subject matter here]
Not very good deriving some quick calculus beep hoop limit integral mean value theorem Calculus 1a on my resume slooop beepity honk SIKE NIGGER 3/10 YOU JUST GOT MUZZLED YOU HOOPTY TROUNCER HEUEHEUEHEHEHEEH @Bags
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entire legacy is for jest killed me
Split's on point itt
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Also I'm just about done with this hellish work week and finally will get around to returning the favor for those who voted on the Short-Verse semifinals.
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