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10-03-2014, 12:18 PM
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SYRACUSE
Join Date: Jan 2013
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timeless didn't really get a feel of continuity in your verse, sotryline or idea wise. Some of your shit was delivered well just seemed a bit scatter brained. Mr J I thought executed a little better and had a ok, cool little spin off a tv show. SO the girl is a fake victim, one of dexter's victims too. Gotcha.
v/ Mr j
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