Jilti vs. Wordz AhGod [Wordz AhGod Wins]

BROKE LESNAR · 10-01-2014, 05:31 AM

Rebuttal Option

▪both competitors must agree to it at time of check-in
▪format is A, B, B, A (A posts first, B drops next, B posts follow-up, A drops final bar)

Due Monday 12am PST

jilti · 10-01-2014, 12:09 PM

when i throw a punch its known to floor a chump
so if i Catchwords in the street, he'll be Slogan up

Wordz AhGod · 10-01-2014, 10:37 PM

on some slaughter shit, I'll go postal with guns in this fuckers mouth
Jil won't have to express himself.. since I'll be shippin em that way to his mothers house.

Packed Graves · 10-01-2014, 10:49 PM

Slogan up didn't connect or translate well, express was corny but enough to do the trick.

Poor Toed Re Can

El Muffin · 10-01-2014, 11:30 PM

There was nothing remotely corny to me about that

Puzzling

Anyway

Jiltis wp was fine..say that shit outloud..its perfect

Pretty good

I liked wordsahgods shit. Never seen express himself flupped like that

Thot it was nice. Like 8.5/10

V

Wag

BROKE LESNAR · 10-02-2014, 08:51 PM

Lmao. Man. Jilti had one of those "design" np/wp's that might translate well in live acapella battles but having..you know how I feel ab this so I'm not going to bloviate. I liked how well you formulated the bar and delivered it. Was real crisp other than the aforementioned nuance. EDIT: Forgot to add that I was feeling the np.

WAG had an awesome fucking bar. No complaints.

v-WAG

Kin · 10-02-2014, 09:04 PM

J... that catchwords slow gettin up was Fire!!!...set.up was ehh..wish it connected more.but that punch was whoa

Wordz...set up was straight...postal...express... didnt.think.the overall hit.was.as hard or creative

Vote..iLL Jil

Unfukwitable · 10-03-2014, 10:44 AM

Jil bar seem like it wouldve been more effective in audio slow gin(gettin) up didn't hit that hard to me dope idea tho, Wordz bar was very simple but it was enough for the win

v/WaG

Defiant · 10-03-2014, 09:51 PM

Jilti tried something it was alright didn't hit to hard tho
Express yourself has been done before but I think it was slightly better than jiltis line

So vote - wordz

Blanco Bishop · 10-04-2014, 10:29 PM

Jeeesuz.

Fire from both but i think jil got this.
Maybe against anybody else words wins but jils np was nasty.

V jil

Camp Bell · 10-04-2014, 11:33 PM

jilti came with a nameplay that didnt hit
nearly as hard as wordz. throw a punch/ floor a chump
just seemed weak compared to wordz build up and execution.

vote: wordz

Bee · 10-05-2014, 02:43 PM

jil seemed forced.. wag was tight seemed a lil stretched though. wag got this one barely.

vote wordz

Kill Spree · 10-05-2014, 04:11 PM

I liked jils concept but felt it was forced/choppy. Wags was smoother and on point

Vote wag

theMuzzl3 · 10-05-2014, 11:47 PM

jilti:

Your opening line wasn't super great, but it set up the second line for dissing him. I loved the Catchwords and Slogan usage. Very creative. Lack of English being correct in "he'll be slogan up" did not dock points, but I'll point it out. Up did not quite rhyme with chump.
Score:
8/10

WAG:

Your first line was threatening, I guess thats okay. Second line killed it & tied it together.
8.5/10

This one was VERY close. Both had good punch lines and execution. Its hard to vote either way… but:

/v WAG

10-01-2014, 05:31 AM	#1
BROKE LESNAR βгοкε ㄴεςηαг Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 2,245 Battle Record: 9-4 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12760964	Jilti vs. Wordz AhGod [Wordz AhGod Wins] Rebuttal Option ▪both competitors must agree to it at time of check-in ▪format is A, B, B, A (A posts first, B drops next, B posts follow-up, A drops final bar) Due Monday 12am PST

10-01-2014, 10:49 PM	#4
Packed Graves Name Flips Are Clever Join Date: Sep 2014 Posts: 471 Battle Record: 9-10 Champed - Alias Tourney '14 Rep Power: 777847	Slogan up didn't connect or translate well, express was corny but enough to do the trick. Poor Toed Re Can __________________ back

10-01-2014, 11:30 PM	#5
El Muffin DOHpe since 02' Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Surrounded by white ppl Posts: 14,690 Battle Record: 43-24 Champed - Netcees Battle League - 1-2 Punch Onslaught - 1-2 Punch League - Hot or Thot Roast - Hot or Thot 2018 - Fight Night 11 - NPL Roast Rep Power: 34230535	There was nothing remotely corny to me about that Puzzling Anyway Jiltis wp was fine..say that shit outloud..its perfect Pretty good I liked wordsahgods shit. Never seen express himself flupped like that Thot it was nice. Like 8.5/10 V Wag __________________ It’s like weed in Highschool- w/ the cans I’ll smoke you Bitch I floss . I Got the chain out to see like Constantinople

10-02-2014, 08:51 PM	#6
BROKE LESNAR βгοкε ㄴεςηαг Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 2,245 Battle Record: 9-4 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12760964	Lmao. Man. Jilti had one of those "design" np/wp's that might translate well in live acapella battles but having..you know how I feel ab this so I'm not going to bloviate. I liked how well you formulated the bar and delivered it. Was real crisp other than the aforementioned nuance. EDIT: Forgot to add that I was feeling the np. WAG had an awesome fucking bar. No complaints. v-WAG Last edited by BROKE LESNAR; 10-02-2014 at 09:07 PM.

10-03-2014, 10:44 AM	#8
Unfukwitable baz∞ka Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 1,643 Battle Record: 38-35 Champed - Fight Night 7 - Battle Arena Tournament - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 36460388	Jil bar seem like it wouldve been more effective in audio slow gin(gettin) up didn't hit that hard to me dope idea tho, Wordz bar was very simple but it was enough for the win v/WaG __________________ WICKeD

10-01-2014, 12:09 PM	#2
jilti neckties Join Date: Jul 2014 Posts: 1,629 Battle Record: 43-19 Champed - BA Cypher - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 20816228	when i throw a punch its known to floor a chump so if i Catchwords in the street, he'll be Slogan up

10-01-2014, 10:37 PM	#3
Wordz AhGod カミノコトバ Join Date: Jun 2014 Posts: 203 Battle Record: 2-0 Rep Power: 0	on some slaughter shit, I'll go postal with guns in this fuckers mouth Jil won't have to express himself.. since I'll be shippin em that way to his mothers house.

10-02-2014, 09:04 PM	#7
Kin Kill.It.Nonstop Join Date: Jun 2014 Posts: 666 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 662201	J... that catchwords slow gettin up was Fire!!!...set.up was ehh..wish it connected more.but that punch was whoa Wordz...set up was straight...postal...express... didnt.think.the overall hit.was.as hard or creative Vote..iLL Jil

10-03-2014, 09:51 PM	#9
Defiant Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,121 Battle Record: 31-50 Champed - Time to Kill I Rep Power: 6442247	Jilti tried something it was alright didn't hit to hard tho Express yourself has been done before but I think it was slightly better than jiltis line So vote - wordz

10-04-2014, 10:29 PM	#10
Blanco Bishop Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: Cali Posts: 1,460 Battle Record: 11-20 Rep Power: 4150485	Jeeesuz. Fire from both but i think jil got this. Maybe against anybody else words wins but jils np was nasty. V jil

10-04-2014, 11:33 PM	#11
Camp Bell Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 733 Battle Record: 10-18 Rep Power: 0	jilti came with a nameplay that didnt hit nearly as hard as wordz. throw a punch/ floor a chump just seemed weak compared to wordz build up and execution. vote: wordz __________________ get high. write rhymes.

10-05-2014, 02:43 PM	#12
Bee Join Date: Oct 2014 Posts: 10 Rep Power: 0	jil seemed forced.. wag was tight seemed a lil stretched though. wag got this one barely. vote wordz

10-05-2014, 04:11 PM	#13
Kill Spree Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2014 Posts: 4,460 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 37645698	I liked jils concept but felt it was forced/choppy. Wags was smoother and on point Vote wag