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ehh...
both of these were wack but had maa potential to be dope muzzle, it was just boring, get the broom and do what? whats the limits in the room, how does all that tie into him being in the womb? you have to be more creative. tomb, ur punch was difficult to read cuz you use numbers in place of words, which makes it sound choppy when you say it. nice concept, just came off as stretched the way it was typed. vote: tomb
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