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Old 09-24-2014, 04:09 PM   #11
Da BattleMasta Patrick
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I'm never there when she wants. You could compare me to songs that never play at the bar. Put in your two cents a dozen times and stay one penny off. I'm stuck inside of your head but sort of dissolve to a tempo. Call it a silent crescendo. The words don't seem all so right. Perpetually flawed. So you nod your head, gentle, or something along those lines.
I aint even really seeing how this rhymes guys, and I don't much understand what it is you mean, but I read it aloud and then recorded myself reading it and it sounded kinda dope, zit like poetry?
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