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Old 09-18-2014, 09:43 PM   #8
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I don't know what Wack MC is. Is this a parody of bad writing? Because if so you did really well, because this was objectively terrible. All of your rhymes were basic and you often added an unnecessary word after a comma just to make them work (, see). The content was childish and base, without being aware or satirical. It was like reading a 5th grade boy writing potty humor, with worse rhymes. Just being honest. Read some of the 'respected' writers here and try harder to do better. Honest feed.
thank you!!!!! That was perfect feedback!

@Bags --- you take yourself way too seriously, bro. If you lost 25% of your ego you'd be 200 times better.
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