AOWL Week 7: Cereal_Killa (1-0) vs. King Keith (3-1) [KING KEITH WINS, 6-4.]

Geno · 04-03-2013, 05:44 PM

cool battle. not big on the topic

ck
straight to the point, dont like the way you came off so fillerish. had a verse pack jammed with elaborate vocab that felt unneccessaryt and reads silly in a lot of areas. just overkill with that imo. makes a verse sound to forced (in this case' anyway).

kk
didnt like the way it was sytructured into a script?play format. but to tbh, dont think it really hurt you this week. cool approach and did well with the content. thought you stole this one pretty easily tbh

ck. you had a lot of cool shit going on man, but all that extra vocab and silly shit -save it for the om, in my eyes it hurts a league topical verse to add so much garbage to it. just my honest opinion -no hate, not even really sure who you are anyway.

vote king kieth, easy inmyeyes

04-03-2013, 05:44 PM	#16
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,354 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036761	cool battle. not big on the topic ck straight to the point, dont like the way you came off so fillerish. had a verse pack jammed with elaborate vocab that felt unneccessaryt and reads silly in a lot of areas. just overkill with that imo. makes a verse sound to forced (in this case' anyway). kk didnt like the way it was sytructured into a script?play format. but to tbh, dont think it really hurt you this week. cool approach and did well with the content. thought you stole this one pretty easily tbh ck. you had a lot of cool shit going on man, but all that extra vocab and silly shit -save it for the om, in my eyes it hurts a league topical verse to add so much garbage to it. just my honest opinion -no hate, not even really sure who you are anyway. vote king kieth, easy inmyeyes __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*