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Old 09-18-2014, 02:29 PM   #24
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OK what I told you was the basic idea of a setup punchline diss

You can keep "I fucked your girl" but look what I did




Your girl hates you & comes to me. Our forays are getting frequent
She's been nibblin on my ear while she'd rather give you that Suarez treatment
The bitch forgot how to fuck. said you never pound it, mac
We had to start from scratch... n ended with claw marks down my back


Setups were enh and the bars themselves aren't great but look - the punchlines also seem like punchlines to a joke because they have wordplay

There are tons of better examples out there tho GET READING
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