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Razor-thin derision
Join Date: Jan 2013
Posts: 4,422
Battle Record: 40-25
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Split - Serene at certain parts, over salted in others. I thought it was about the extravagant yet painful habits of a modern narcissist, but who am I to develop your photo album? It was good stuff but a little underwhelming.
Darth Yoda - The language usage here was good, and actually struck me as a little formulaic. You used strategy within to lodge a satisfactory vision of what a photograph is, to the reader. Hollow interpretation but tenderly written and interesting. Vote goes to Yoda. |
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