Quarterfinals: 1. El Pancake vs. 5. Eŋg \\ Eŋg wins 6-(-3)

Vulgar · 09-14-2014, 09:48 PM

Eng - I know you're very particular about what goes where in your verses, so this seemed like an intricate treatise on a mountain climber's motivation to live. It ranged from outgoing to cynical for me, and at times was a little to ubiquitous to take anything firmly rooted away from it.

Pandake - No doubts you tried to be crafty with this one. It was kind of mustard-y. What I mean by that is it was bitter where it could've been sweet, minor league tasty, shuffling without giving up a card. I thought it was okay.

I liked Eng's more. Good spar.

09-14-2014, 09:48 PM	#7
Vulgar Razor-thin derision Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,422 Battle Record: 40-25 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night LIV - Gimmick Battle League (2x) - Write Week II - Art of Writing League - Storytelling And Topical Invitational Tournament - STI - Haiku Writer Challenge - GWL Picture Challenge(2x) Rep Power: 49604320	Eng - I know you're very particular about what goes where in your verses, so this seemed like an intricate treatise on a mountain climber's motivation to live. It ranged from outgoing to cynical for me, and at times was a little to ubiquitous to take anything firmly rooted away from it. Pandake - No doubts you tried to be crafty with this one. It was kind of mustard-y. What I mean by that is it was bitter where it could've been sweet, minor league tasty, shuffling without giving up a card. I thought it was okay. I liked Eng's more. Good spar.