Plot vs timeless - PLOT WINS

Kill Spree · 09-11-2014, 07:18 PM

This was one sided tbh

Time - you had trouble with rhyming fa real. I see your concepts and personals but I felt you tried to jam allot into each bar. If you focus on one concept and keep it simple, you'll get this. Get a concept, right the punch then build off that punch

Plot - the bum fluff was kinda childish but I laughed. Maritime was nice tbh. And that was enough there to take it but then the rest of your verse didn't rhyme.

Vote plot for two solid hits

09-11-2014, 07:18 PM	#8
Kill Spree Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2014 Posts: 4,460 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 37645698	This was one sided tbh Time - you had trouble with rhyming fa real. I see your concepts and personals but I felt you tried to jam allot into each bar. If you focus on one concept and keep it simple, you'll get this. Get a concept, right the punch then build off that punch Plot - the bum fluff was kinda childish but I laughed. Maritime was nice tbh. And that was enough there to take it but then the rest of your verse didn't rhyme. Vote plot for two solid hits