Contendership Match: Jilti vs. Camp Bell [Jilti Wins]

Meth · 09-04-2014, 04:11 PM

The 1-2 Punch League

Due Monday Midnight Pacific

@jilti @Camp Bell

jilti · 09-08-2014, 02:08 AM

im a proven beast in 2 different leagues, gettin offers to join crews constantly
while your still in Training,Camp.. and it took a Gamble just to put u on a team

Camp Bell · 09-08-2014, 07:26 PM

my plays wildly commended, this an easy defeat
his scripts hot? the shit stops after wat i kick drop
until jay out of contention like the yeezy release

El Muffin · 09-08-2014, 08:03 PM

hmm interesting.

I rly like camps approach but jiltis was creative as fuk. nice line

v jil

good shit tho camp

Certain · 09-08-2014, 11:27 PM

jilti: Best line of the week. It was personal, clever and well-worded, and it didn't feel forced.

Camp Bell: OK, I follow the careers of Kanye West and Jay Z quite closely. I don't get it. Maybe you can explain it to me, but at that point, you've already failed.

Vote: jilti

Blanco Bishop · 09-09-2014, 03:21 AM

Jilt was solid with the flow n personal.

Camps didn't hit like last week with the three line approach
Third line kinda fell off imo.

Good shit from both tho.

V jill

BROKE LESNAR · 09-09-2014, 03:33 AM

I've actually got Camp on this one. I liked the setup the cliffhanger and the execution. Idk if the Training Camp np has been used yet but at this point I'm kind of getting tired of the camp variations concentration/summer/band/training. I know it was a personal but the np that connected it just didn't wow me. The delivery was really choppy too.

v-Camp

Kin · 09-09-2014, 07:24 AM

J good wording....only.part I thought was rough was if he is still in training camp...he wouldnt be on a team yet...nahimean...but the gamble shit fit wit that..so cool

Camp....felt maybe the filler line coulda been shortened other then that pretty dope name punch...

Close...but J has two seperate nameplays in one punch...thats what edged him for.me

Vote..J

jilti · 09-09-2014, 09:05 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Kin

J good wording....only.part I thought was rough was if he is still in training camp...he wouldnt be on a team yet...nahimean...but the gamble shit fit wit that..so cool

Camp....felt maybe the filler line coulda been shortened other then that pretty dope name punch...

Close...but J has two seperate nameplays in one punch...thats what edged him for.me

Vote..J

Thanks for the vote.

Just wanna explain.. if someones in training camp, they are on a team. example; Broncos training camp, Eagles training camp, etc.

MKG · 09-09-2014, 11:42 PM

Didn't really likes the three line punch, it can be effective but I didn't like this one tbh

Jails punch was dope and well executed

Vote jil

sral · 09-10-2014, 09:06 AM

I liked Camp's line, just hated that it took three lines to get out. Sure, three line punches can work, just not in a 1-2 punch league where the premise is that YOU ONLY GET TWO FUCKING LINES, IDIOT.

Regardless, I liked Jilti's more.

Camp Bell · 09-10-2014, 02:46 PM

@jilti got this, good shit bro. thanks for the votes

jilti · 09-10-2014, 03:08 PM

Thanks @Camp Bell. Same to you

trap · 09-11-2014, 06:56 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Certain

jilti: Best line of the week. It was personal, clever and well-worded, and it didn't feel forced.

Camp Bell: OK, I follow the careers of Kanye West and Jay Z quite closely. I don't get it. Maybe you can explain it to me, but at that point, you've already failed.

Vote: jilti

It was a shoe punch.

Certain · 09-11-2014, 06:58 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by trap

It was a shoe punch.

Then what does Jay have to do with it?

trap · 09-11-2014, 07:02 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Certain

Then what does Jay have to do with it?

Jordan.

Certain · 09-11-2014, 07:07 PM

And Jordans were out of contention?

trap · 09-11-2014, 07:14 PM

Kick drop.
And after the Yeezys came out, yes...until the next Jordans launch.

Stop asking me questions.
Jilti won anyway.

KnowP · 09-12-2014, 10:05 PM

Camp was a bit too wordy n indirect to me while jil has the good personal/word play.

Vote jil

Destroyer · 09-13-2014, 11:17 AM

I got camp
jiltis was just too easy of a play

v/cb

09-04-2014, 04:11 PM	#1
Meth Back again. Join Date: Aug 2011 Posts: 2,653 Battle Record: 12-5 Champed - Time to Kill IV - 1-2 Punch Panic Room Rep Power: 4489511	Contendership Match: Jilti vs. Camp Bell [Jilti Wins] The 1-2 Punch League Due Monday Midnight Pacific @jilti @Camp Bell __________________ Crystal

09-08-2014, 02:08 AM	#2
jilti neckties Join Date: Jul 2014 Posts: 1,629 Battle Record: 43-19 Champed - BA Cypher - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 20816228	im a proven beast in 2 different leagues, gettin offers to join crews constantly while your still in Training,Camp.. and it took a Gamble just to put u on a team Last edited by jilti; 09-08-2014 at 02:32 AM.

09-08-2014, 07:26 PM	#3
Camp Bell Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 733 Battle Record: 10-18 Rep Power: 0	my plays wildly commended, this an easy defeat his scripts hot? the shit stops after wat i kick drop until jay out of contention like the yeezy release __________________ get high. write rhymes.

09-08-2014, 08:03 PM	#4
El Muffin DOHpe since 02' Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Surrounded by white ppl Posts: 14,690 Battle Record: 43-24 Champed - Netcees Battle League - 1-2 Punch Onslaught - 1-2 Punch League - Hot or Thot Roast - Hot or Thot 2018 - Fight Night 11 - NPL Roast Rep Power: 34230535	hmm interesting. I rly like camps approach but jiltis was creative as fuk. nice line v jil good shit tho camp __________________ It’s like weed in Highschool- w/ the cans I’ll smoke you Bitch I floss . I Got the chain out to see like Constantinople

09-08-2014, 11:27 PM	#5
Certain Mad fucking dangerous. Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 12,066 Battle Record: 40-19 Champed - AOWL Season 3 - Art of Writing League (2x) Rep Power: 85899406	jilti: Best line of the week. It was personal, clever and well-worded, and it didn't feel forced. Camp Bell: OK, I follow the careers of Kanye West and Jay Z quite closely. I don't get it. Maybe you can explain it to me, but at that point, you've already failed. Vote: jilti __________________ I'm just swinging swords strictly based on keyboards, unbalanced like elephants and ants on seesaws.

09-09-2014, 03:21 AM	#6
Blanco Bishop Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: Cali Posts: 1,460 Battle Record: 11-20 Rep Power: 4150485	Jilt was solid with the flow n personal. Camps didn't hit like last week with the three line approach Third line kinda fell off imo. Good shit from both tho. V jill

09-09-2014, 03:33 AM	#7
BROKE LESNAR βгοкε ㄴεςηαг Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 2,245 Battle Record: 9-4 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12760964	I've actually got Camp on this one. I liked the setup the cliffhanger and the execution. Idk if the Training Camp np has been used yet but at this point I'm kind of getting tired of the camp variations concentration/summer/band/training. I know it was a personal but the np that connected it just didn't wow me. The delivery was really choppy too. v-Camp

09-09-2014, 07:24 AM	#8
Kin Kill.It.Nonstop Join Date: Jun 2014 Posts: 666 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 662201	J good wording....only.part I thought was rough was if he is still in training camp...he wouldnt be on a team yet...nahimean...but the gamble shit fit wit that..so cool Camp....felt maybe the filler line coulda been shortened other then that pretty dope name punch... Close...but J has two seperate nameplays in one punch...thats what edged him for.me Vote..J

09-09-2014, 11:42 PM	#10
MKG Senior Member Join Date: May 2014 Posts: 481 Battle Record: 2-2 Rep Power: 0	Didn't really likes the three line punch, it can be effective but I didn't like this one tbh Jails punch was dope and well executed Vote jil

09-10-2014, 09:06 AM	#11
sral LARSLARSLARSLARSLARS Join Date: Aug 2014 Location: CRUMPETVILLE Posts: 8,605 Battle Record: 28-3 Champed - Gimmick Battle League - The Winter Topical - Topical Martyrs - Lime Green Poetry Association - Lyric Olympics - Art of Writing League - Guerrilla Writing League (2x) - Black August II Rep Power: 85899396	I liked Camp's line, just hated that it took three lines to get out. Sure, three line punches can work, just not in a 1-2 punch league where the premise is that YOU ONLY GET TWO FUCKING LINES, IDIOT. Regardless, I liked Jilti's more. __________________ - Netcees Rebuttal Tourney - Art of Writing League (x 4) - AOWL Season 11 Champion (Undefeated Season)

09-10-2014, 02:46 PM	#12
Camp Bell Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 733 Battle Record: 10-18 Rep Power: 0	@jilti got this, good shit bro. thanks for the votes __________________ get high. write rhymes.

09-10-2014, 03:08 PM	#13
jilti neckties Join Date: Jul 2014 Posts: 1,629 Battle Record: 43-19 Champed - BA Cypher - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 20816228	Thanks @Camp Bell. Same to you

09-11-2014, 07:07 PM	#17
Certain Mad fucking dangerous. Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 12,066 Battle Record: 40-19 Champed - AOWL Season 3 - Art of Writing League (2x) Rep Power: 85899406	And Jordans were out of contention? __________________ I'm just swinging swords strictly based on keyboards, unbalanced like elephants and ants on seesaws.

09-11-2014, 07:14 PM	#18
trap Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2014 Location: KCMO. Posts: 377 Rep Power: 14025267	Kick drop. And after the Yeezys came out, yes...until the next Jordans launch. Stop asking me questions. Jilti won anyway. __________________ triplet syllables for minimal criminals.

09-12-2014, 10:05 PM	#19
KnowP Nasty Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 222 Battle Record: 6-3 Champed - BA Cypher Rep Power: 3463488	Camp was a bit too wordy n indirect to me while jil has the good personal/word play. Vote jil