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Old 04-02-2013, 05:40 PM   #14
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Cdm:

“We aint free: our economy is merely the restructuring of debt. America is broke and owned by the FED.”

Ummm awesome :)

Look this so far is 1# verse of the week for me, I was all for King Keith’s hands down.. And this ish is all what im into.. Other countries political and financial situation and their entire economic system.. You wrote this with heart and understanding.. You kept through in everyday slang which brought this piece to a one on one word of advice.. I loved that.. the lines where stretched at times no doubt but the message and the content was so fucken important that who gives a shit..

“And now we bring you up to speed on how the great deception was sprung”

Ultra cool..
Fantastic piece and if you haven’t watch “The Inside Job” yet about the “Global Financial Crisis” peep that ish IMMEDIATLEY.. immediately.. immediately.. immediate-ly


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Hey dude that concepts sick.. Don’t blame it on FATE, oh so too often do people do this “shakes fist in air” dope shit dude seriously.. Hey your structure and general style itself is always on par with sweetness, I mean your ish rocks no doubt.. The metaphorical lines of emotion and action, the twisted arse vocab that hits hard.. dude all up dope drop as always my man.

“Tearing rifts or shifting halves of hearts around until they fit”

Oh why yes sir I do like :)

Vote = c.d.m

Hey this is brutal, cause the first glance of overwhelming information in cdm really and truly has mass value to me.. And don’t get me wrong ink’s twist on fate was ace but CDM’s verse grabbed me by the bulls I mean, ahh you get what I mean.. tight match up guys..
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