AOWL Week 7: Vinzr (3-1) vs. Que (0-0)-- [QUE WINS 9-2]

Frank · 04-02-2013, 04:45 PM

Vinzr - I see your strengths in moment-to-moment writing. You transition from thought to thought is impeccable. Your thought process is keen but your lyrics aren't the sharpest. Last paragraph was dilating though, Good shit.

Que - Great verse. You were on some kevin sorbo shit. the ... and the !!! were strong here. Barbaric bars man. I raise my goblet to you. Last lines of both verses were heavy.

To die for happiness is an honor....to kill for enlightenment is an order
To spread elation is our mantra.....we fight for the Gods of Morgah! - Que

My vote goes to Que; one of my favorite reads this season. Welcome to the AOWL - My friend. Feast with the lions.

04-02-2013, 04:45 PM	#13
Frank Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 3,228 Champed - NWL Season 2 - Art of Writing League (5x) - Lime Green Poetry Association - AOWL Season 6 - AOWL Season 10 Rep Power: 3853347	Vinzr - I see your strengths in moment-to-moment writing. You transition from thought to thought is impeccable. Your thought process is keen but your lyrics aren't the sharpest. Last paragraph was dilating though, Good shit. Que - Great verse. You were on some kevin sorbo shit. the ... and the !!! were strong here. Barbaric bars man. I raise my goblet to you. Last lines of both verses were heavy. To die for happiness is an honor....to kill for enlightenment is an order To spread elation is our mantra.....we fight for the Gods of Morgah! - Que My vote goes to Que; one of my favorite reads this season. Welcome to the AOWL - My friend. Feast with the lions. __________________ *VETWORK*