Round 2: 1. El Pancake vs. 9. Mike Wrecka \\ El Pancake wins 8-(-4)

Pent uP · 09-05-2014, 05:11 AM

Pancake - I had you as a strong favorite to win this tourney from the get go and this verse is a perfect example of why. Your knack for characterizing so efficiently gives you an edge due to the length limit in the earlier rounds. I appreciate how the verses ended, it was like breaking the 4th wall moment that eclipsed the rest of the verse perfectly.

Mike - I was wondering when someone would utilize the line limit for some technical flair. Loved it. My biggest grievance here is it felt like a cheap attempt at working with the topic. The verse itself was one dimensional, effective at getting a point across but not much that was engaging

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09-05-2014, 05:11 AM	#1
Pent uP Robin Williams of Fallen Victims Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 1,499 Battle Record: 25-11 Accomplishments - NC Hall of Fame Champed - Netcees Writers League (2x) - NWL Season 1 - Write Night I - Art of Writing League (2x) - Write Week IV Rep Power: 6862275	Pancake - I had you as a strong favorite to win this tourney from the get go and this verse is a perfect example of why. Your knack for characterizing so efficiently gives you an edge due to the length limit in the earlier rounds. I appreciate how the verses ended, it was like breaking the 4th wall moment that eclipsed the rest of the verse perfectly. Mike - I was wondering when someone would utilize the line limit for some technical flair. Loved it. My biggest grievance here is it felt like a cheap attempt at working with the topic. The verse itself was one dimensional, effective at getting a point across but not much that was engaging Vote Pancake Last edited by Pent uP; 09-05-2014 at 05:15 AM.