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09-04-2014, 01:24 AM
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Mad fucking dangerous.
Join Date: Jul 2013
Posts: 12,066
Battle Record: 40-19
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Blanco Bishop: This was the best line I've seen from you. The personal aspect of this made it really strong. It would have been easy to use a line about Gamble's accomplishments on someone else, but using it on A.Knightmare in this way was strong.
A.Knightmare: "Abroad" punchlines are really old. This was a nice rendition of one, but it's below what I expect from you to drop something this common. Vote: Blanco Bishop
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