Sly Swag

[Sho Money EMG]

No patience for slow maintenance I'm living a legend...
Slash / rap spittin professor giving a lecture to these little pretenders.
I'm the infamous inventor... U just a crease around a physical texture
So I bet ya in a few years they'll forget ya like Nikola Tesla.
I'm beyond the essence of comprehension. While u condescending.
It don't matter if u got protection, I'm kinda wreckless once my arms extending, cool calm collective.
U could keep this on the record once I stomp ya head in with constant stepping
I continue proving I'm aggressive... Pain never stops it's endless
I have no conception of soft contestants
A monstrous veteran, if u fight now I put ya Lights out with my tommy-gun Thomas-Edison.
Constant adrenaline.. Try contending and consider it done
Spittin so sick the shit in my lungs even think I might rip the tip of my tongue.
This is just fun.. A hobby to raid ya lobby u get put down fast with a good loud blast
... If u look me up you'd learn to know, I'm someone u don't look down At..
Tryna smoke?
Got that good brown hash and that KUSH now, FACTS..
Oz's for two hunnit a piece, I'm like fuck it it's cheap
Cop a couple, roll up.. Burn a L till I'm suddenly leaned, under the sheets fucking asleep.
That does it for me... Till the next day start my Hustle, repeat
They love when I speak... I turn urban lounge gatherings to a club on a beach.
Trust me, son it's wonderful B... This the life that u want and u need..
Let's get this paper... Fuck a hater if he doesn't believe.

[Camp Bell]

I liked this, i thought the references were cool
of course the rhyming was dope, in my opinion
tho, couldve been more complex, experiment
sometimes bro, make line 1 and 2 rhyme with
line 5 and 6, 3 and 4 rhyme with 7 and 8 type
shit. keep working. alpha out. lmaooooooooo

[Sho Money EMG]

Originally Posted by Camp Bell

I liked this, i thought the references were cool
of course the rhyming was dope, in my opinion
tho, couldve been more complex, experiment
sometimes bro, make line 1 and 2 rhyme with
line 5 and 6, 3 and 4 rhyme with 7 and 8 type
shit. keep working. alpha out. lmaooooooooo

Lol word son that's what I been doing... Experimenting w/ different flows and structures, also believe it or not but when I'll get some bullshit feed from the haters pointing out all my flaws I actually have been taking their criticism and applying it

[Camp Bell]

Originally Posted by Gamble

Lol word son that's what I been doing... Experimenting w/ different flows and structures, also believe it or not but when I'll get some bullshit feed from the haters pointing out all my flaws I actually have been taking their criticism and applying it

word word, thats how you gotta use the haters. yo, just made an AIM if you wanna fuck wit me on that. Wax Camp

[Sho Money EMG]

Gotchu Ima holla

[dull boy]

Dope.

[dull boy]

Originally Posted by Camp Bell

make line 1 and 2 rhyme with
line 5 and 6, 3 and 4 rhyme with 7 and 8 type
shit.

-_-

This was dope, because it felt organic and natural. I don't know what Cambell is talking about, or if he's kidding, but Canibus thinks that's trying too hard to be complex.

[Camp Bell]

Originally Posted by dull boy

-_-

This was dope, because it felt organic and natural. I don't know what Cambell is talking about, or if he's kidding, but Canibus thinks that's trying too hard to be complex.

lmaoooo @ canibus.


nah, i thought it was dope as well..
i was just trying to say, experiment with his rhymes
the 123 example was just tryna be funny at the same
time. all props to gamble tho

[Sho Money EMG]

Good looks. 30 views and no1 leaves feed lol

[Sho Money EMG]

Up

[Blanco Bishop]

Ill. Sounds like it b dope on audio.

[Split]

pretty good flex

[blueflamez]

This was an ok drop, some decent concepts. Try using less stretched lines, it threw the flow off at points.

[Sho Money EMG]

Thanks