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09-03-2014, 09:50 PM
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I liked this, i thought the references were cool
of course the rhyming was dope, in my opinion tho, couldve been more complex, experiment sometimes bro, make line 1 and 2 rhyme with line 5 and 6, 3 and 4 rhyme with 7 and 8 type shit. keep working. alpha out. lmaooooooooo
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