Contendership Match: Meth vs. KnowP - Meth wins

Certain · 09-02-2014, 11:02 PM

KnowP: Your punchline begs the punch. That wording was so drawn out it got to be tedious, and the setup was clumsy. But mostly, the line didn't connect. It wasn't harsh or funny or clever, really. It was bland.

Meth: Your punchline begs the puncher. Also, the "mayonnaise sandwiches and sides of bologna" part of your setup was clumsy. But what you had that KnowP didn't was a pretty clever punchline.

Both of you need to quit calling the kettle black.

Vote: Meth

09-02-2014, 11:02 PM	#1
Certain Mad fucking dangerous. Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 12,066 Battle Record: 40-19 Champed - AOWL Season 3 - Art of Writing League (2x) Rep Power: 85899406	KnowP: Your punchline begs the punch. That wording was so drawn out it got to be tedious, and the setup was clumsy. But mostly, the line didn't connect. It wasn't harsh or funny or clever, really. It was bland. Meth: Your punchline begs the puncher. Also, the "mayonnaise sandwiches and sides of bologna" part of your setup was clumsy. But what you had that KnowP didn't was a pretty clever punchline. Both of you need to quit calling the kettle black. Vote: Meth __________________ I'm just swinging swords strictly based on keyboards, unbalanced like elephants and ants on seesaws.