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native system
Join Date: Mar 2013
Posts: 387
Battle Record: 18-21
Champed - Short-Verse Topical
Rep Power: 4453411 ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() |
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Pancake wrote a highly developed topical In his limited real estate. That was something I didn't expect. I thought shorter stories being accented by dialog up would be the key to this but span cake proved here that you can use metaphors images and phrases to develop something with just as much depth. Innovator actually showed that too. However his wording and rrhymes just slightly under shot the bar pancake set. Voting for pancake. Good battle
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