Round 1: R. CopyPat vs. 7. Diode \\ Diode wins 9-1

Frank · 08-31-2014, 10:14 PM

Copypat,

Packed the verse into a Mattell box and ripped the plastic right off son! Life size Textcee Doll verse right here. I enjoyed the pacing, and the cadence of this niffty little number was totally slamming!! The opening tit-ties line had me scratching my head a bit, (ties/tees) but nothing I couldn't chew over or chalk up to a Canadian accent. Hilarious concept that fell flat and gradually sagged but not before I sucked her virtual breast dry of all its digitalized milk. Good job.

Diode,

Jammed the lines and Walter Paytoned it through the baricade brick wall of line backers waiting to stuff you at the goal line. Well done. Dense meathead body but with a qb IQ.

Voting Diode for the bombarding break of tackles

08-31-2014, 10:14 PM	#12
Frank Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 3,228 Champed - NWL Season 2 - Art of Writing League (5x) - Lime Green Poetry Association - AOWL Season 6 - AOWL Season 10 Rep Power: 3853347	Copypat, Packed the verse into a Mattell box and ripped the plastic right off son! Life size Textcee Doll verse right here. I enjoyed the pacing, and the cadence of this niffty little number was totally slamming!! The opening tit-ties line had me scratching my head a bit, (ties/tees) but nothing I couldn't chew over or chalk up to a Canadian accent. Hilarious concept that fell flat and gradually sagged but not before I sucked her virtual breast dry of all its digitalized milk. Good job. Diode, Jammed the lines and Walter Paytoned it through the baricade brick wall of line backers waiting to stuff you at the goal line. Well done. Dense meathead body but with a qb IQ. Voting Diode for the bombarding break of tackles __________________ *VETWORK*